The young man stopped and stared at the girl as though she were an alien from out of space, ready to invade earth. He thought to himself, “I have never seen a girl with so much make up and hideous cloths in my life. She looks as if she stepped off the cover of a Sci-Fi Magazine, without the amenities. That’s what is wrong with girls today; they want to look like the next Tyra, or Mariah. Who does she think she’s trying to impress? She is not a professional make-up artist. See, that’s the result you get when you try so hard. If she wants to impress the guys, than the make-up must go. See boys doesn’t like when girls have on the different cosmetics. We like real girls that don’t have to try so hard to impress a guy, because they know who they are inside and out. I must have been staring for a long time, as I snapped back to reality she was saying something that I just couldn’t make it out. Excuse me; yes I am talking to you. What are you looking at? O, I am sorry didn’t know you caught that. I walked away as I was laughing to myself. I can’t believe she just caught me.
Sunday, May 16, 2010
Wednesday, May 5, 2010
The young man left school hurriedly as he boarded the bus
Free Write #3
The young man left school hurriedly as he boarded the bus, he knew if he wanted to go out to the movies tonight he had to finish his chores before his parents returns for work. Robot six is the hottest movie that came out this weekend and it would be the most talked about in school on Monday. All his friends would be there, but he wanted to be the first one to see it. When the bus driver pulled up in front of his door the young man quickly jumped off, rushed in the house, immediately he starts to clean the house. He has exactly two and a half hours to finish cleaning, showing, and get there by seven. His parents would be home in exactly one hour and thirty minutes. He was now starting to wonder if he would make it on time. His parents arrived home at six o’clock they checked to see if all his chores were done, they paid him his allowance and he was out the door by six fifth teen, jumped on bus sixty-five and arrived at Time Theater at six-forty-five and still have fifteen minutes to grab popcorn and nachos. O and don’t forget the coke.
The young man left school hurriedly as he boarded the bus, he knew if he wanted to go out to the movies tonight he had to finish his chores before his parents returns for work. Robot six is the hottest movie that came out this weekend and it would be the most talked about in school on Monday. All his friends would be there, but he wanted to be the first one to see it. When the bus driver pulled up in front of his door the young man quickly jumped off, rushed in the house, immediately he starts to clean the house. He has exactly two and a half hours to finish cleaning, showing, and get there by seven. His parents would be home in exactly one hour and thirty minutes. He was now starting to wonder if he would make it on time. His parents arrived home at six o’clock they checked to see if all his chores were done, they paid him his allowance and he was out the door by six fifth teen, jumped on bus sixty-five and arrived at Time Theater at six-forty-five and still have fifteen minutes to grab popcorn and nachos. O and don’t forget the coke.
Monday, May 3, 2010
He saw her pass by
Free Write #2
He saw her pass by everyday at the same time, but he didn’t have the confidence to approach her. She was the most beautiful women he had ever laid his eyes upon; at least that’s what he thought. If I only knew her name than I can relax a little bit, she walks with such style and grace. Her hair is long, black and down her back, I just have to find away to talk to her. As she start to pass by, at her regular schedule time. It seems as if today she’s mesmerizing as before. I seem as if I was day dreaming for hours, because when I looked up she slipped on the debris that surrounded the side walk. With no hesitation he ran out to help her up and asked, if she was ok? After blushing for five minutes he finally build the courage to speak. He say’s to her, I see you walk pass everyday may I ask what is your name?
Biopoem
Shaquana Nechelle
Sexy, dreamy, humble, down to earth
Daughter of Tonya Scott and Tony Anderson
Lover of my neices, nephews, cooking
Who feels motivated, inspiring, determined
Who needs love, patients, time
Who fears failure, snakes, heartless people
Who gives support, love, understanding
Who would like to see Paris, world peace, happiness
Resident of Miami, Florida
Anderson
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